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| Craven 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abusei dig it. i'd recommend a semicolon instead of a comma though. |
| Sylvia Woolf 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is PERFECT. I haven't read a haiku that actually SAID something or evoked any kind of emotional response in me for a long time, so this is especially refreshing. Thank you! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat way of putting it. I like it. |
| hey maria 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI love it, it's so sweet. The title is fitting too. |
| windy girl 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this; it's sweet, but not overbearingly so. Good job. -max |
| DiaRose 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseHee, that's so cute! I just love it! It made me smile. Love, ~Dia |