Awesome!Ilove it. update soon

thats was cool i think ther was about two mistakes in that so it wasnt really that bad on that end nor on the tehr end actually. i want to know what her ful plan is and then i want to know how its going to pan out thats will be fun _ can wai for the next chapter get writing ok _

lolololololololol great chapter! and great discriptions of the er... dog part. Matts? lollolol...anyways, superb story!

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! STOP USING THE NAMES OF PEOPLE FROM OUR SCHOOL WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT!

Mr. Barker in a thong...BAD IMAGING!

and why Austin Tyler!

ANYWAYS! Check you email PLEASE. and then you can say that I was totally stupid tomorrow

veronica, can you please put up the next chapter

Wonderful story Helen aka Veronica Kimble. I was enjoying the story and you stoped how unfair, but I love the story/chapter. Keep up the updates.

Gosh! This is good except for the part where you left me hanging. I can't wait to know why I HAVE to know why. By the way you know me.

Blondie

why did you sign this ronnie? just out of curiousity. god chapter. can't wait for the next!

ah cliff hanger what the hell is going to happen to her really i want to know and who was on the phone ah im going to scream by the ond of the day heehee

The first 5 lines are good. Maybe you want to write a little more though. Because there is not much to R&R. LOL!

don't take this the wrong way but...WHAT THE HELL IS THIS STORY ABOUT? Other than that, good chapter. Luv your stories, as always.

i like it you it sound really good you should kkeep writng and dont let any body dont not even your self as for you all you know this may be a big hit and really i will read every bit of it ok

jez