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| CarnivalGirl346 2008-05-05 ch 3,  | abuseAwesome!Ilove it. update soon |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abusethats was cool i think ther was about two mistakes in that so it wasnt really that bad on that end nor on the tehr end actually. i want to know what her ful plan is and then i want to know how its going to pan out thats will be fun ^_^ can wai for the next chapter get writing ok ^_^ |
| uke-lay 2008-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuselolololololololol great chapter!! and great discriptions of the er... dog part. Matts?! lollolol...anyways, superb story! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseI CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! STOP USING THE NAMES OF PEOPLE FROM OUR SCHOOL WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT! Mr. Barker in a thong...BAD IMAGING! and why Austin Tyler!?!?! ANYWAYS! Check you email PLEASE. and then you can say that I was totally stupid tomorrow |
| adanael 2008-01-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseveronica, can you please put up the next chapter |
| Bloody V. 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseWonderful story Helen aka Veronica Kimble. I was enjoying the story and you stoped how unfair, but I love the story/chapter. Keep up the updates. |
| CarnivalGirl346 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abuseGosh! This is good except for the part where you left me hanging. I can't wait to know why I HAVE to know why. By the way you know me. Blondie |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abusewhy did you sign this ronnie? just out of curiousity. god chapter. can't wait for the next! |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseah cliff hanger what the hell is going to happen to her really i want to know and who was on the phone ah im going to scream by the ond of the day heehee |
| CarnivalGirl346 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThe first 5 lines are good. Maybe you want to write a little more though. Because there is not much to R&R. LOL! |
| Riley Hunter 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abusedon't take this the wrong way but...WHAT THE HELL IS THIS STORY ABOUT? Other than that, good chapter. Luv your stories, as always. |
| hypa to hell and back 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abusei like it you it sound really good you should kkeep writng and dont let any body dont not even your self as for you all you know this may be a big hit and really i will read every bit of it ok jez |