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| siphoned afterglow 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abuse'just a mermaid girl who doesn’t know how to swim afraid of having faith in herself searching for answers beyond dreams and stars and tears in their eyes' i love this,its sad, moving and honest. i can relate to this so much, it was as if you read my thoughts, (or maybe we think alike ;D) there are very few poems that i can relate to whole heartedly over here and this is definitely one of them you write wonderfully. awesome *favs* |
| Her Wishing Well 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, i can relate, being in a slight confusing state of mind at the moment. I loved the language you used - captivating. |
| fairytale failure 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseLovely =) Every stanza has a different idea but they all focus on a central concept - I guess I would call it 'finding yourself', but only for lack of better words. I especially liked the second last - I used to categorize everything I wrote into folders, but I can't do it anymore...everything is intertwined. |
| Kicking Poe 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusethat last line is perfection - chilling, electrifying, makes me wish I had written it. every stanza has its own power, and they fold together subtly in a sort of alice-in-wonderland self discovery. profound and eloquent as always. cheers. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuse"i want to taste the sky when i step outside on a cold winter morning" sometimes i believe that i can taste and touch the blue on my tongue but sometimes i also think i'm only fooling myself. "i don’t know how to collect myself like i used to" hm, too true. |
| Tikklz 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nicely done. This poem feels complete. Pristine, actually. You captured that lost feeling one has at that stage in life where you get to pick who you want to be. Before that stage, everyone has defined things for you. It's a very intense time, and I think you greatly put forth the way you can feel lost and hopeful at the same time. |
| lost for words 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's beautiful and every word seems to perfectly belong where you've put it. A definite favourite. |