Wow. I love how in the beginning it just seems like the guy kissed the girl in front of a crowd, and its undeniable that he loved her. What a change in mood after I realized I was wrong. Very well done. Very beautiful.

WOW AGAIN. Both the plot and the way you wrote it is very refreshing. You really emphasised the events and punctuated them well. :)

loves :3

brilliant writing... and i love the concept... yeah :3

Wow. This was wonderfully written.