Reviews for The Day I Had To Babysit

readyforpeace 2007-12-23 ch 3,	abuseI like how you can really feel Autumn's emotions. very nice chapter :)
Pinkamoo 2007-12-22 ch 3,	abuseYou spelt 'tongue' wrong. But cute, nonetheless.
readyforpeace 2007-12-22 ch 2,	abuseI'm really glad that you continued the story I really like it. She was 10 at the time and you wrote "17 years later third-person point of view now." meaning that Autumn and Darran would be 27. And thats fine but the way you write it makes it seem like they are younger for some reason. Especially because Autumn asks for a ride to their house and doesn't just drive herself. I like it as it is, it's just something to think about. Maybe 7 years later would be more appropriate? I really like the last couple lines, it's very suspenseful. Keep writing it's going very well. :)
Pinkamoo 2007-12-22 ch 2,	abuseOh, cute. She is very forward.
readyforpeace 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseI think that it's a great start. I really like the innocence of the line, "When it got dark Darran was very, uh... what is the word I am looking for... oh yeah, romantic!" I'd love to read what happens when they are seventeen. :)
Pinkamoo 2007-12-16 ch 1,	abusePretty cute :p Good job!