A sweet sense of nostalgia in this piece!

your writing is so perfect. it makes me melt a bit from the sweetness, its like a box of chocolates. but deep and heartfelt. i love it. sorry i can't give a technical review, i've never been able to. i just know what i love.

wow. this is breathtaking. you are an amazing writer, with one hell of a way with words.
welcome to my favorite authors list
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Ohohoh, I love the second stanza. It's so reminiscent of my grade school days. And, flowers & butterflies have always captured my undivided attention.

The whole poem is lovely. The last three lines were sweet. =)

-max

Oh wow! *jumps about*

Ah this is gorgeous! I love the whole flower theme... and the child theme , "a child's boldness is what I lack" - I can relate to this line a lot. It is such an innocent piece, which is difficult with subjects like this - well I find it difficult anyway haha...

"no words for my affection reach my lips" kjsdfiuhthtuieiutjhjuygeqe78tnkfg!.i love it! i'm not sure what it is about it but that is such a beautiful phrase...

it is also a perfect conclusive ending ... hmm the whole piece is perfect !

Ophelia is such a gorgeous name as well. Excuse this slightly incoherent review, its just that I haven't read something this good for ages .

Lizzie x