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Reviews For: Ophelia

Isca 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseA sweet sense of nostalgia in this piece!
writes between the lines 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseyour writing is so perfect. it makes me melt a bit from the sweetness, its like a box of chocolates. but deep and heartfelt. i love it. sorry i can't give a technical review, i've never been able to. i just know what i love.
Carousel Chorus 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abusewow. this is breathtaking. you are an amazing writer, with one hell of a way with words. welcome to my favorite authors list x.CC
windy girl 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseOhohoh, I love the second stanza. It's so reminiscent of my grade school days. And, flowers & butterflies have always captured my undivided attention. The whole poem is lovely. The last three lines were sweet. =) -max
this young lady 2007-12-17 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! jumps about Ah this is gorgeous! I love the whole flower theme... and the child theme , "a child's boldness is what I lack" - I can relate to this line a lot. It is such an innocent piece, which is difficult with subjects like this - well I find it difficult anyway haha... "no words for my affection reach my lips" kjsdfiuhthtuieiutjhjuygeqe78tnkfg!.i love it! i'm not sure what it is about it but that is such a beautiful phrase... it is also a perfect conclusive ending ... hmm the whole piece is perfect ! Ophelia is such a gorgeous name as well. Excuse this slightly incoherent review, its just that I haven't read something this good for ages . Lizzie x