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lostandwandering 2008-01-15 . chapter 1
wow, this is truly a huge portal into your life. isn't it amazing how much an impact one person can make on our lives? my great grandma was in your words, " my hand of God" very too the point, and honest, which is how life should be. the truth.
Burnt Bread 2007-12-29 . chapter 1
Mobman, I'm surprised no one else has reviewed this yet and I regret taking so long to do so. It's a beautiful piece that speaks much more about you than the other things I've read because it feels as though you're not trying to write something; it's just something that came out. It reads as though you didn't exaggerate his goodness at all and that honesty sometimes makes the words seem awkward because truth doesn't always wait for those perfect words. I hope you never forget this man.

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