O.m.g! that was awsome why did u say it sucked?
anywho,
M U S T
UPDATE
S O O N!!
getting real intresting!

No! I hate cliffies you meanie =[ it was just gettin good!!
haha but anyways sorry for the late review i dont have internet..

right now im sitting in the closet since thats the only place im getting internet lmao.
anywho...so im guessing these things 'aren't' ghosts right?
well idk, i can't wait for more though!

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aw, i dont think this was choppy, it was really detailed and really intresting, usuall when introductions are mentioned in story, they do get rather boring...
but anyways i hope u update as soon as u did w/ this chapterr!!
t/c.

omfg, this is abosolutly amazing! You must update soon, please!!please!!
haha and oh yeah it is real tempting to drool ain't it?
haha
but please update soon, you're an awesome writer.

Good, unique story. Nice build up to the end, and great descriptions. I especially liked the sunset. Great work.