Really cool story. Gonna read the sequel. :)

Wow that was great :D
the last chapter was very good! ^_^ me likey~ hehe ;D

I've just started to read this and I think the first chapter rocks! :D i'll be reading it till the end~ ^_^

Wow. This was really interesting, surprising, and a great horror fic. I really loved how you turned it into a twisted love story. Great job!

Show me what it's like to be the last one standing!11
hahaha... nickleback.
Good story!
~Racquet

Well that Todd's a creeper!
I've always hated the name Todd...
~Racquet
PS. I likes it!

Wow, like your descriptions in the dream-- I really can't wait to see what happens next. This is the first horror I've read ( I really do like the genre-- I just haven't gone to it yet). Do you possibly know any other good horror reads?
Anyway, love your story and glad that I don't have to wait until the next chapter is up!
~Racquet

I have read your whole story, so I'm leaving you a long review for it all.

I really really liked your story. I thought it was really good and interesting, and didn't exxagerate anything, and really took it's time. The only thing that bothered me was the dialogue between the girls and guys. I dunno, I have a problem with dialogue too, it's an art form. It always comes out sounding fake. Now yours wasn't as bad as I've seen it, but maybe you should try reading it from another's point of view and saying "hmm... does this sound cheesy?" I try to do that, not saying I'm any better, but you know, this is coming from a reader.

I like the idea that Felicity didn't only have multiple dreams about one thing, now she's having dreams about a boy named Johnny. Is that one out already? Cuz if it is, I must read it, it sounds really good. It is going to be a sequel right? And Felicity's dreams were vivid, you described those very well. You also described the pain and fear and FATIGUE! she felt from it, so I thought you did a very good job there.

Well anyway, happy writing! I may be checking out some more of your stories!

I think it was great the way you lead in with the dream sequence in this chapter. I caught it immediately. I can't wait to see how it ends. I hope they kick some a**.

That Was One Hell Of A End I Tell U What I was Very Impressed Good Job



Super Awesome Guy

Wow This Chapter Was Very Good. I Liked It. Keep Up THe Good Work

Super Awesome Guy

Aw... Simon Is A Guardian And I Find That cool... Good Work..


Super Awesome Guy

Wow Again With The Cliffy I Like that In A Author Keep It Up...Good Job I Cannot Wait TO Read The Next Chapter but Alas Cannot At This Monmt

Ok Let Me Just Say...WOW I didn't expect Todd of all people to show back up at Fee's house thats a little freaky...Good Story Thus Far So Yeah I Hope U Keep Writing These Types Of Stories!Cuz They Are Frickin Awesome...^^



Super Awesome Guy

Wow This Story Is Getting Good I'm am very Impresed withyour work. Keep Up the good work. besides the sequel which i have yrt to read your stories are very intresting...

Super Awesome Guy