I loved it, very sweet.
Awesome writing. :)

aw that was really good, there's a whole back story though that never was explained that im curious about but i don't want to be one of those people who asks for more on something the author clearly said was a one shot.

The last sentence makes me smile. I appreciate the irony, two enemies kissing together.

Ah, i like it. It was cute and sweet and really just a page out of a book. I like when pone-shots are like that. When they have little things in the like the "Holiday Barbie" thing and how they were putting on a show. It makes it that much more interesting and gives you a little insight to their backgrounds without ruing the story by getting carried away from the main point.

Love,
Becca

Very good oneshot :)

soo cute !!

Interesting

I think it was a bit random, but I do wish that since you revealed his name, you should reveal hers as well. (: It was lovely writing, though, and an awesome oneshot. (: A super addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (:

Tres cute mi amigo (Yes, mix of languaged, whatev's.) Good job!

It was interesting enough. =)

It was cute though, so it's all good.

aw, this was ADORABLE :)
I absolutely positively loved it
made my day

aw! really good though!

lol its a funny cute story :D

wow it was only one ch and im craving for another ch to read lol. update soon! -lilazndork

I like it. And thats about it.