 starlit x sky 2010-03-01 . chapter 1I loved it, very sweet.
Awesome writing. :) |
 Zwidon 2009-01-28 . chapter 1aw that was really good, there's a whole back story though that never was explained that im curious about but i don't want to be one of those people who asks for more on something the author clearly said was a one shot. |
 Icyfire4w5 2008-12-29 . chapter 1The last sentence makes me smile. I appreciate the irony, two enemies kissing together. |
 HelloLovely 2008-07-04 . chapter 1Ah, i like it. It was cute and sweet and really just a page out of a book. I like when pone-shots are like that. When they have little things in the like the "Holiday Barbie" thing and how they were putting on a show. It makes it that much more interesting and gives you a little insight to their backgrounds without ruing the story by getting carried away from the main point.
Love,
Becca |
 d666lisa 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Very good oneshot :) |
 floopfloop 2008-03-23 . chapter 1soo cute !! |
 Sapheneia 2008-03-14 . chapter 1Interesting |
 Lily Llynn 2008-01-01 . chapter 1I think it was a bit random, but I do wish that since you revealed his name, you should reveal hers as well. (: It was lovely writing, though, and an awesome oneshot. (: A super addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (: |
 Pinkamoo 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Tres cute mi amigo (Yes, mix of languaged, whatev's.) Good job! |
 Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-29 . chapter 1It was interesting enough. =)
It was cute though, so it's all good. |
 the wicked monkey 2007-12-29 . chapter 1aw, this was ADORABLE :)
I absolutely positively loved it
made my day |
 HeartOfTheBarrierSnow 2007-12-28 . chapter 1aw! really good though! |
 xxily4everxx 2007-12-19 . chapter 1lol its a funny cute story :D |
 windybidindy 2007-12-17 . chapter 1wow it was only one ch and im craving for another ch to read lol. update soon! -lilazndork |
 beccabrighteyes 2007-12-17 . chapter 1I like it. And thats about it. |