 Matthew James Current 2008-01-14 . chapter 1I believe to call your work "gothic' would be a disservice as your work is decidely a distinct entity from such a cliche-ridden and distasteful subculture.
Your work betrays ability that surpasses your age. Your words are more thought out, your images more precise than many, many young people your age. I am not sure what exactly has caused you to create such dark, inspired pieces of poetry but I will observe that you are using your talents well. Should you continue to do so, and refine your abilities, I am sure that you would be able to produce very exciting, extremely good, and distinctly original poems. |