like what katrina my cuz said...wow...again!

I believe to call your work "gothic' would be a disservice as your work is decidely a distinct entity from such a cliche-ridden and distasteful subculture.

Your work betrays ability that surpasses your age. Your words are more thought out, your images more precise than many, many young people your age. I am not sure what exactly has caused you to create such dark, inspired pieces of poetry but I will observe that you are using your talents well. Should you continue to do so, and refine your abilities, I am sure that you would be able to produce very exciting, extremely good, and distinctly original poems.

I love the word choice. Good poem.

love it! -said in opera like tone-
[i'm addicted to morbidness...]

wonderful job, i was shivering.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost

Again, wow.

A dark yet almost tragic scene you have created. This girl you speak of appears to be devoured by an unknown force of shades, thus causing her to become perplexed.

I thoughly enjoy reading your work. Keep writing :D