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| lookin4nemo 2008-01-20 ch 1,  | abuselike what katrina my cuz said...wow...again! |
| Matthew James Current 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI believe to call your work "gothic' would be a disservice as your work is decidely a distinct entity from such a cliche-ridden and distasteful subculture. Your work betrays ability that surpasses your age. Your words are more thought out, your images more precise than many, many young people your age. I am not sure what exactly has caused you to create such dark, inspired pieces of poetry but I will observe that you are using your talents well. Should you continue to do so, and refine your abilities, I am sure that you would be able to produce very exciting, extremely good, and distinctly original poems. |
| Sephira X 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the word choice. Good poem. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuselove it! -said in opera like tone- [i'm addicted to morbidness...] wonderful job, i was shivering. yours until the wind changes, Lost |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAgain, wow. |
| Karma Komba 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseA dark yet almost tragic scene you have created. This girl you speak of appears to be devoured by an unknown force of shades, thus causing her to become perplexed. I thoughly enjoy reading your work. Keep writing :D |