love this so far. I love your writing style. I hope you update soon!

**, I want more!

this was great. keep up the good work and writing. i hope there will be more.

omg! i really am enjoying his creepy and evilness! it's erally freaky but entertaining.

you haven't updated recenlty update soon!

i need htere to be an angel :)

wow, amazing plot and story. please update soon!

Bahh hurry up and post up chapter 7 I'm dieing to know what will happen, I really hope someone will save her, that or she kills Regan.

Oh my goodness. You really have to continue this story.

It's great. Please update...

Will be keeping an eye on you...XDXD

Thanks.

this story is amazing

its just so well written

and it really thrilling

i want more!

MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!

I liked the title of this, and the summary seemed interesting too, so I started reading this. The plot didn't disappoint - it's ineresting.

But you have to work more on the overall represantation. The way you cross over from one point of view to the other is too sudden; you should rather signify in some kind of way that the POV has changed. Also, you need to seriously expand what you've written so far. As much as I could tell, most of your story consists of dialogue. You should write more about what happens in between; as in saying more about how they interact. Don't get me wrong, dialogue is important, and you did a great job on it, but no story can hold up on dialogue alone.

I hope that didn't discourage you, because the plot is really interesting. I especially liked the twist, when Regan admitted that Codin is his stepsister. Anyway, I hope you'll think about the advice I gave you (don't take it too bad on me) and that you'll update soon.

O wow this story is verry strong.
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Hehe but i wish that regan would change through out the story, you know? Like make him become nicer and compasinate, and stop rapping her. Like he falls for her and stuff and she falls for him but there's a love triangle with D.
O and also...why wouldn't she simply call the cops?
lol

This is such a great story, update soon!!

great story!

Nice with the senior and with the step-brother twist.

Dane is awesome; realistic. And I like the whole mask thing.