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| Quinty 2008-03-02 ch 5,  | abuseWell, you've got me hooked! I really want to read what happens next! Hopefully Jake and Lee work this out. Kyle gives good advice, he's a good friend! I'd really like a description of what the characters look like! I envision Lee as a kind of preppy boy, since he's on the football team. And Jake... well he's the one with gray-blue eyes, right? Pretty! But yeah, since he is a bit of a loner... I kind of envision him as an "emo" kid. But I don't know! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Quinty 2008-03-02 ch 4, | abuseAw... I feel bad for Lee. I'm interested to see what happens at school now. |
| Quinty 2008-03-02 ch 3, | abuseStupid homophobic principle! I like this a lot so far! :D |
| Quinty 2008-03-02 ch 2, | abuseI know it was her fault!! Lee needs to leave her! But who knows what she'll do if he does?! |
| Quinty 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseMan... Mandy is a bitchface! I think it should always be friends first, especially if you've known them longer! I'll keep reading! |