 Quinty 2008-03-02 . chapter 5Well, you've got me hooked!
I really want to read what happens next! Hopefully Jake and Lee work this out. Kyle gives good advice, he's a good friend!
I'd really like a description of what the characters look like! I envision Lee as a kind of preppy boy, since he's on the football team. And Jake... well he's the one with gray-blue eyes, right? Pretty! But yeah, since he is a bit of a loner... I kind of envision him as an "emo" kid. But I don't know!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |