I really like the contrast between the two people in this poem. My favorite lines: "you just wanted to fit in, / I just wanted to stand out."

"I was too busy taking in the world, / and you were too busy disposing of it"

You have a unique and wonderful style of writing, and I really enjoy your poetry.

I like the idea of putting the concept of originality into a poem like this. I also like the contrast of the narrator and the other person.

Plus, I actually understand what you're trying to tell me in the poem and it doesn't sound like a bunch of jibberish. YAY! XD

lol, wow. love this poem!