Thanks so much for the read! I loved it, especially the part where you describe Jamie playing the guitar...
It's a great story. I really enjoyed reading it.

The only critique I have right now is that you've been spelling inconsistent inconsistant. :P

Thanks again!

(from ): I read the introduction and part of the first chapter. There are some real minor typographical and grammatical things that can be cleaned up fairly easily, but such typos are my biggest pet peeve, so I'm sorry to say I haven't read your entire posted section.

As a frame, you've laid some pretty good foundations, but you could elaborate more -- describe the loneliness of highway 81, paint a stronger picture of Rose's feelings at her homecoming, the rush of the diner. Though I assume she's come back (you reference her fleeing), you don't give enough details to indicate WHY everyone would be whispering about her. Are they good whispers? Why doesn't someone call out to her? Are they snubbing her?

And, just random...how are one woman and one 6-month-old baby going to eat two PLATTERS of eggs?

Again, strong foundations, I can see the direction you're taking and it's intriguing.

I dont no if u still read ur reviews or anything... your stories amazing and could honestly be taken for a novel thats already published.

Thats Such a great story.

ah! i guess you'd enjoy a review so i've decided to leave one for this fic, which i really enjoyed alot. haha... i read the first chapter and was glued to it immediately, took me a couple of hours to get thru the whole thing.. and i only slept at 4am to finish it. i guess i'm the type that like romantic fiction, especially when the couple just has some misunderstanding, love each other but can't seem to overcome themselves to get to each other. loved the tension between them throughout the story! :)

Wow...I loved this story. It's like a cross between "Beauty and the Beast" and "The Scarlet Letter" (weird choice of reference right...well I'm in love with that book!). Great job...and keep that ink flowin'. Can't wait for the next book!

This is going to sound wierd but...I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS! It was a realy good story and I thouroughly enhoyed reading every but of it! THANK YOU!!

Can the next chapter be M, and that better not be the end!(EVEN THOUGH IT ROCKED!)*2 thumbs up* UPDATE!(if there is more)

WHAT?! WOW! This is killing me! UPDATE!!

AW E! UPDATE!

I know my reviews are shory and annoying but gosh this is awsome! UPDATE!

Are you trying to kill me with the heartbreak! UPDATE!

AW E I need an UPDATE!

So I'm confused why you don't have more reviews. This is an intriguing well-written tale. I've just spent over an hour reading all 11 chapters, and I hope you will update soon. More so however, you should know that your story is quite good. Normally the number of reviews and hits are indicative of this, but... hence this review (which I do rarely nowadays). I very much like how you've portrayed Jamie's and Rose's simultaneous feelings of love and regret. Isn't it amazing the effect a baby can have? I certainly hope that such long terrible winters don't occur routinely...
P.S. I do have an account, addicted2storiz, but I am not able to log into it now... just to let you know. I really did feel that this deserved a review, or some sort of acknowledgement.

E This rocks! UPDATE!