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VampireFanatic 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
So cruel. I want to seriously hurt both of them, they love each other and they're just... just... Infuriating, I guess would be the best word for it. Great little mini series though. Absolutely love it, and I believe it'll honestly hold a little place in my heart.
half-sketched.staccatos 2007-12-17 . chapter 1
konban wa

"I bet you could cut the tension in this room with that letter opener lying next to you." I can't say way exactly, but I really liked this line. I also loved the way you ended it. It sounded choppy... but it sounded as if it was SUPPOSED to be that way.

"But you don't come.
The elevator opens.
And I get in."

Very final. *sniff* Poor couple. Too bad...

Zaijen
-Shan-
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