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Twist Their Emotions 2008-10-04 . chapter 1
I love this. I'm graduating this year and I'm definitely a little scared. This was nice to read.
Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2007-12-17 . chapter 1
That is absolutely wonderful. I know exactly how you feel. I remember leaving school and the fear of unknown responsibility. This is one of the few poems i have found on this site that rhymes without force.

Bravo.
Noellen 2007-12-17 . chapter 1
This has the coolest flow to it in my mind. Awesome~

This part, "Of the joy, and of the sorrow,
Of mounting nerves,
Of the vague tomorrow," along with the last lines are my favorite.


on a side note I felt like this last year. /)_(\
staras 2007-12-17 . chapter 1
I like this, most people can't pull off a catalog very well but I think this one's great. The end really pulled it together.
-Amy
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