|Reviews for State of Mind|
| Twist Their Emotions 10/4/08 . chapter 1
I love this. I'm graduating this year and I'm definitely a little scared. This was nice to read.
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j 12/17/07 . chapter 1
That is absolutely wonderful. I know exactly how you feel. I remember leaving school and the fear of unknown responsibility. This is one of the few poems i have found on this site that rhymes without force.
| Noellen 12/17/07 . chapter 1
This has the coolest flow to it in my mind. Awesome
This part, "Of the joy, and of the sorrow,
Of mounting nerves,
Of the vague tomorrow," along with the last lines are my favorite.
on a side note I felt like this last year. /)_(\
| Rafiqa 12/17/07 . chapter 1
I like this, most people can't pull off a catalog very well but I think this one's great. The end really pulled it together.