ok for the english part of me: 'Minds been weld and twisted' shouldn't it be welded? weld doesn't quite sound right.

For teh friend in me: deep. I like it, it has a secretive sense to it thats nice.

i didnt understand all of it, prolly cause im tired. but im guessing i know wat its about. :(

Cute, I will admit that. The grammar is fine and the form is really up there, my only problem is in my taste of poetry, you just didn't fit in. However, you need to put up a summary for people to read it.

very interesting, i especially like the lines: "Minds been weld and twisted
Lines were scripted"

good poem :)