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| KristinaGuzman 2008-08-18 ch 13,  | abuseI love all your stories, you are a fantastic writer, your stories are not the same stories I read, there original. Plz update soon on this one, its one of my favorite!! I also love profecy of sorrow |
| LittleEmoKid 2008-07-10 ch 12, | abuseI want more! I want more! This is such a brillant story! I love it! Though, Rashida is a **! I think she's evil. I think Rose should have kicked her in the shins. That would have hurt a whole lot more! I hope Rashida dies a horrible death. ^_^. I love your story though. It flows well, and the overall plot is one of the best that I've read in a long time. |
| My.Psuedonym.Was.Taken 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseI'm really enoying this story, and the mother-daughter relationship between Elizabeth and Rose. I'm awaiting the next chapter eagerly I can assure you that! My.Psuedonym.Was.Taken aka Maddy ☺ |
| peaceout 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseI really enjoy this story. You put a lot of thought into it. I especially love the tone you use in this story. It's very appropriate. The scene where Elizabeth and Rose are playing 'chase' is adorable. I tend to like those moments in stories that have children in it. Great job! Update soon please! |
| LittleEmoKid 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseHmm.. How should I start? I loved this story. It is well thought out, and very believable. I really like how you describe your characters. I like how you made sure Rose was timid at first about being a Vampire's Pet. I must say it is very different from most of the stories. She is not mistreated in the slightest, and she has now become bold, and an important part to the vampires. I hope you will write more soon. I look forward if and when you do. If you do not mind take a look at my stories. If you could please Review. I think your intake on any of the stories would be greatly appreaciated. Perhpas some advise as well. Thank you for writing this. |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abusegah i can't wait for the rest |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abuseaw how sweet what a nice chapter ill make sure when it goes out in stores i will buy it |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseoh my word i still have goose bumps you did a wonderful job on this chapter |
| tffny012 2008-03-25 ch 9, | abuseso cute!! can't wait for the next update! :) |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-03-15 ch 9, | abuseAww, I love this story so far, Rose is so cute! I like the way you've portrayed the vampires in your story, as benevolent leaders and protectors, it's new and I find it very enjoyable to read. |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-03-06 ch 8, | abuseah wow keep up the great work |
| tffny012 2008-02-06 ch 6, | abusehmm..i wonder what will happen! update again soon! |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-02-01 ch 6, | abuseoh sweet |
| GemfirestoneMoonbeamcatcher 2008-01-09 ch 5, | abuseAw i love it it is a hit in my favorites list keep up the good work. |
| tffny012 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abusethis is a very interesting chapter! can't wait to see what happens to rose! update soon! |