Loved it!

This was so cute! you should totally continue this as a story! If you need a beta, I'm happy to help. :D

I love you yaoi imaginations! :) Keep it up!

A sweet yet short story of love, So sad that we will never know how the rest of their lives go, but may we have great inspiration form this story so we all may write our own sweet tails. X3 Misspelling or Intentional placement?, You decide!

daaaamn that wuz a gr8 story, if i was u and was realllly nice ud write more adventures wit jone-kun the amazingly sexy, cute, shy, awesum...AGH! im going on and on.. the point is absotutley luvved like to make a request! more of this manga wuld be gr8 thanx dude or dudette again repeat luved it...and if u make anutter one and anutter one and anutter one i give u brownie points. :3 tats perty much it tho ur a gr8 writer i truly du luv ur storiezzz. CHOW!

Kent is NOT 17!

You say right there, at the top, that he's 19!

You liar!

GET YOUR FACTS STRAIGHT!

(although, you might have eventually... But I only read as far as him saying his age... Well, back to the story now, I'll comment again if you correct yourself somehow, lol.)

kawaii!

*drools* i also liked, no loved, how this came out. *nosebleed* uh oh... *holds up sign before passing out* sign: that was great

this shouldve not been a oneshot...do more!

Cute! Love this to pieces! "“I’m you’re guy!” Jone’s face held pride." you're your

Your story has potential, but it wasn't very clearly written to me. I was confused when you said they were drunk after drinking water that was really sake...wouldn't you know if you were drinking sake, and not water? And on that note, how could you not know you're drunk? Maybe, if you write a longer story next time, you'll be explain better.

This is so GREAT! A lovely read. Keep up the amazing work!

Yaoi! You are a yaoi god! I love you! Amazing! PLEASE WRITE MORE! Kent sounds sexy!

fucking awesome! X3-yaoi fngurl/kitty smile

that was good...you should do a sequel or somethin