 DreamSweet 2008-03-22 . chapter 1Wow, you made me actually feel panicky, that's something to be proud of. Good job. |
 Finwe 2008-03-16 . chapter 1You did a marvelous job of making this come alive for those who haven't experienced terror to that degree. It was... amazing. I don't think you could right about it in such a way as to instill the feeling in others if you hadn't experienced it firsthand yourself. And that sucks. Wonderful job, though. Take care. |
 The Prettiest Banana 2008-01-11 . chapter 1Unfortunately, I can relate.
beautiful, clear imagery.
Wonderful job, yet again. |
 Grey of Solitude 2008-01-08 . chapter 1In shock right? I never was in shock before. Hoping I won't either. Nice. |
 Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-04 . chapter 1I must say that yes, I've felt that. It stinks... Great poem- love it as usual. |
 Billie.Joelle 2008-01-03 . chapter 1Wow. Very nice. So... real. I like it. Keep writing, good job. |