This has to be the sweetest, cliché-free love poem I've read in a very long time. Everything from the title to the imagery to the subject matter is approached with boldness and well chosen words/phrases. I very much enjoyed this poem, it's just really well written.

Peace, Daze

That is so incredibly sweet please keep writing and enjoy!

g-g-g-gasp. wonderful, powerful, great use of vocabulary.

all together i think this is my favorite poem i ever read and i'm not joking. it was really well written so keep writing :)