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| salvagedstars 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI find it interesting how you vary the way things are written. It's quite refreshing, actually. Nice poem. -salvagedstars |
| Pesadilla Mortal 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really enjoyed this. Every line had a sense of raw emotion encased in it, and that's honestly what poetry is all about. I really enjoyed this one. :] |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI like the format a lot... the ending is great..very in denial |
| Nikki <3 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't read your writing as often as I wish I did...but every single time I take a minute to read something you've written, I am absolutely blown away. I wish I could do this. Write about my raw emotions...or even things I've never expereinced. I wish I had the imagination you have. You may have wondered in the past what made you so great? (I know you did because I just read a diary entry where you were wondering...) Well, Jen... It's everything. The way you don't always care what people think of you, but do care in a way. The way you smile and laugh and treat people nicely even if you don't necessarily like them. The way you write so openly and express yourself. To put it all simply, what makes you so wonderful is just being you. |
| painted.music 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abusekonban wa Beautiful. The imagery and just... poetic-ness of it was absolutely stunning. Lovely, lovely, lovely. :D And I can think of nothing else to say, which is slightly odd since I usually can't get myself to shut up. ;) Just kidding. Well, halfway kidding. *adds to author alert* Zaijen -Shan- |
| perpetual questions 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseThis really captures the intensity of the moment, contrasted to the events that will later occur. I like the formatting. Good work. |