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Reviews For: Her Too Full Suitcase

Zonne
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseOkay, that is so sad and weird.

The beginning is amazingly sad and well written. Everything about it. The simpleness, the hurt, the anger and the dad (meanie)

and then the weird ... tiger in a cage?...

I'm confused.

The suitcase analogy was great too. I like how she 'stuffs' her feelings in there. It really is an exceptional way to express that struggle.

but the tiger still confuses me.

So write on if you will.

Zonne
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