Brutal, that reminds me an awful lot of my older gear. A love gone so horribly west that the facade we all wear is ended. Stings a bit don't it love? I was impressed and I say crack on, the formatting was somewhat unusual for a poem, it seems more prose for the most part but I liked it nonetheless.
Keep up the good work and I hope things go better in future, the land of love is a total pain but it's better than the accursed valley of Aintgettenany.