"Living is a lost art.
Caring is a dead language.
We are a lost cause."

well cross me side-ways, how absolutely beautiful
and frightfully true
no matter how right we are though,
writers will always be labeled pessimests

truly,
eve

Powerful. This work truly is one of your best

I like this, it is something that I think a lot of people can relate to and I do understand that people who care and feel are very rare. I like the way that you ended it as well.

Keep it up.

Amazing! I typically try and find something to critique in every poem, but I can't find anything here! Perfect!

I'm loving the way you describe life, time, hope - among other things - as if they were objects or personified in a way. Personally, I think it makes more of an impact. The italicized words as well - especially in the verses written in story format. Love this as well as the rest of your works