Ok so I am no longer your gf and there are no conciquences to my brutal honesty so here goes.
you are NOT like the Jurg in this story no matter how much you would like to think you are.
the story is reasonably good but Im not actually a fan of being portrayed as a ** to be completely honest.
You should carry it on till the end rather than not writing more just because no one is reading. some books arent read untill the author is dead and gone, it dosnt mean its not good just cause no one has read it. It just means the people who have care about you and you should be glad that anyone does.
and finally you should change the summary because as you told me this story was not originally your idea someone at work thunk it would be a cool idea and you went whith it. nothing wrong with that but she should get some creit rather than you hogging it all and letting your megalomania grow just a little more.
thats all.

Yay its me :D

This is really great mate, keep it up.

My only critique of course is this 'Stu' character. I feel his character is underdeveloped and in the interests of a well-rounded story there should be some kind of rampant sexual encounter in his honor, possibly involving four or five virgin fledgings of both species. ^^

Keep it up, and i look forward to reading this when its all done :)

i've finally gotten round to reading it and you simply must continue! it is a fantasicly gripping read.
luffs u
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I shall arrange things in the near future. At the moment I'm toying with a splinter story. I'm desperately trying to stop Jurgen from getting a happy ending and have come up (with a little help) with several possible ways of doing this, so I might start a new "story" here with the possible chapter 9s in it and see which works best. If all else fails it's an interesting writing drill to see how many different ways I can finish the story. If one of them turns out far superior it will be made the canon chapter 9, if not this is the finale. Simple.

MOAR, NOW!
also, your at an ideal chapter to start to create a story with a middle dilemma to solve at the ending. I suggest you do it.

MOAR. too.

MOAR. Now

This is possibly the final chapter of Hairy Knuckles. Any further iinto this story will require some serious effort on my part and frankly judging by the viewing stats of this story it won't be worth it. My readership as it stands consists of my girlfriend, one of my best friends and someone he knows. Much as I love you guys I don't think this story is worth continuing just yet. All of it has been off the cuff. None of this is more than a few hours old when posted but as it stands I've got no idea where I'm going. I'll probably post one or two small additions but I don't think this is really going to have a satisfactory end.

Chapter 3 is a bit of a mammoth, guest appearance by Laura, whom I love to death and probably to the sixth level of hell, I've never been to the seventh so I'm not sure if I love her there yet. I probably do.
Yeah it seems like I'm adding some depth to Liz finally, Jurgen gets ever more monstrous with every passing chapter, he seems to be somewhere between Marv from Sin City and myself. Maybe I'll start making him more Jurgy and less Marv'D, maybe not. I kinda like him this way, he's a nasty sod.
Seems like nobody's ever going to read this trash so fzaak it, I'll review it. I got a muse spike so I might put another chapter up in a few hours.