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| Samurai Poet 2007-12-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis is pretty good. What I get from this haiku is that the one who is to sleep can't sleep because of visions of you. Then, the person wakes up to the realization that you are not there, hence the rotten morning where all pleasant dreams end on an unpleasant trip back to reality. Great haiku! |