wow, your haiku is very good... I've thought about writing it sometimes but I never get around to doing it.
you really create a great state of mind for a moment... great that u stick to the form/meter too!
-keep writing! Merry Christmas! or whatever holdiay u celebrate...

I like this. I haven't read anything quite like it on Fictionpress before, so it was refreshing to read something new. Simple, but very effective. I love the choice of words, very well written.

Too true