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| Giana 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abusewow, your haiku is very good... I've thought about writing it sometimes but I never get around to doing it. you really create a great state of mind for a moment... great that u stick to the form/meter too! -keep writing! Merry Christmas! or whatever holdiay u celebrate... |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I haven't read anything quite like it on Fictionpress before, so it was refreshing to read something new. Simple, but very effective. I love the choice of words, very well written. |
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseToo true |