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| Lord Iceberg 2007-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseVery interesting, and very clever. This is the kind of story that you have to read twice to really get, and I really like that. 'Bandanna' has two 'n's, by the way, but apart from that, the writing is faultless and wonderfully descriptive. Well done. |