Ack! I'm just as frustrated as he is. I was so excited that the little pest had grown up and now it all turns out to be a dream. F my life! lol

read this a while back this chapter i'll admit youyou snuck it by what i was expecting so whats the next story coming and the summoner you gonna rm that?

The ending made me chuckle. I just read the whole story in one go and really enjoyed it. Odd situations you put your characters into. I can't really blame Tern for having more than one personality there lol Great job with it :)

My, oh my. Kidnapped in the very palace? How very...irresponsible. ..of the king. What major disaster subverted the guards, watchful servants, courtiers, any merchants that were not in on the plot? THough it does make it more exciting. Tern's dillemma with his wives, while immensely humorous, is starting to become stale...No offence intended. But the focus should probably shift to something else. Like, perhaps, a daring escape consisting of trickery, betrayal, a large display of princely swordplay, the intelligent brat saving everyone, and getting lost in the middle of nowhere with absolutely no idea where they are? That would be fun. *drifts off into her daydreams as another enemy falls, gushing blood...* ;)

Uy, he is in trouble. Physically, AND emotionally.


I can't WAIT to see what happens next!

:) CD

just a question but what is her ultimate goal the god child?

Oh my, ANOTHER woman to deal with?

Or you could have the 'nurse' be a eunuch, to save Tern some grief.

:) CD

This is a very interesting story. I have never read anything like it before. I like it. I can't wait to read more.

Excellent story! Good dialogue and emotion. Setting could use a little help though. Describe the surroundings. Where are they in the castle, for the wedding?

interesting yet slightly disturbing funny combination

what are they teaching that girl?
its a great story, and I can't wait for the next update, but wow!
what a cunning little brat.
Tern better watch his back with this one!

There is something seriously wrong with Amalie. But the story's interesting.

:) CD

...Yeah, I've got to agree. He's doomed, but it makes an interesting story to read. Keep it up dude, and update soon. Oh, don't forget your others either, we've been waiting a while for those.

Nice, very nice. A good little piece of humor. And it seems like you guys characters always havep another "person" living in their mind, but that's cool. Is this being continued, or is it a one-shot? And are your other stories being updated soon as well?

Still, as always, keep up the good work, and update soon!

oh this is very interesting and funny! Please continue!