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| OH FOR THE LUV OF GOD it bu... 2008-09-03 ch 12,  | abuseUPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! IT BEN AGES!HURYY UP!UPDATE! Cough Cough Anyway...yea so...its good...yea. Actually i quite like it. Though you can probly tell. okay then... ~Jak~ |
| no.man's.girl 2008-08-09 ch 12, anon. | abuseYou. Need. To. Update. Now! Please? I'm dying to know what's gonna happen! |
| PrincessPeach131 2008-07-18 ch 12, | abuseAw this is such a cute story! It's definitely a cliche, but there aren't enough quality versions of this particular cliche here, and I'm a sucker for the girl dressing up as a boy story (She's the Man, Tamora Pierce, Princess of Theives, Mulan, etc.)! Anyways, this is very interesting but also realistic, and your characters are multi-dimensional as opposed to the pre-teen fantasies that have no depth. So congratulations, and thanks for the entertaining read! I hope that you update son! |
| empressofwierd 2008-07-17 ch 12, | abuseplease update soon this is one of my fav stories and i dying to read the next chapter |
| Nithareia 2008-07-09 ch 12, | abuseYou're doing a wonderful job on this revised version! I loved the original, but this is my first time reading this version, and I must say I'm impressed. ^^ Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon! |
| spring robins 2008-07-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseRead it, am waiting for more. You *don't* suck, my G-d. |
| the kitten 2008-06-16 ch 12, | abusehelo! ever going to update? you'd make my year! |
| Sarahj259 2008-06-14 ch 12, | abuseawesome possum storyness! Great job! |
| FM Radio 2008-06-05 ch 12, | abuseoh BOO BO BO! You must update, like tomorrow! I know I dropped off the face of the earth, but I'm back and I still love you! And this! I totally want to meet Victor's father, so update asap! By the way, i caught something that i think you should know about. When Charlotte says "You’re a girl! You SHOULD be stuck in those clothes.” She eyed Sabrina distastefully, curling her lip. It doesn't make sense. It sounds like Sabrina should be dressing like a boy even though she is a girl, I think you meant to say "You’re a girl! You shouldN'T be stuck in those clothes.” She eyed Sabrina distastefully, curling her lip. That makes a lot more sense, if i'm wrong message me back and explain! :) UPDate soon |
| FM Radio 2008-06-05 ch 10, | abuseOh my god, what an effective way to end that! It worked so well, and you can just imagine Jamal's face, great job! Oh well, off to the next chapter...(did i use the right effective? Affective? GAH!) |
| Aurorablu 2008-06-05 ch 12, | abusethis is pretty cool. update soon! |
| IGNIS Elementi 2008-05-28 ch 12, | abuseHow freaky! For the past two weeks my classmates and I have been playing the card gambe **. I thought it was freaky 'cause we've been playing it like crazy and here it is in your story. Crazy right? Yes there were A FEW grammatical errors, but the content WAY out does that. This chapter was AMAZING! I can't wait for your next update!! |
| Roman Candles 2008-05-25 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter! I hope the wait is shorter for chapter 13. I love that you introduced Stacy as a potential girlfriend for Theo. He's just too cute not to pair up. I'm curious about something, though, what happened to Sab's angel wings and her other tattoos? Keep up the awesome work! |
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2008-05-24 ch 12, | abuseHaha, pretty awesome story; it's really starting to pick up--more and more people are noticing. Ha, I really like the take you've had on the whole dressing up as a boy thing, because most of the times authors spend so much time managing the girl so that she's attracted to her 'hot' roommate. Definitely like where you're going with this. Looking forward to an update! |
| tehcrazykatlady 2008-05-24 ch 12, | abuseAww man, I don't know how many times I almost hurt myself laughing while reading this. Hilarious, truly. And I love how deadpan Sabrina/Sebastian is all the time. It's like has the plot-line of some cheesy shoujo manga, but is actually really original and the characters almost believable. It's beautiful and I love it! Looking forward to seeing it all fall apart. -Tehcrazykatlady |