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| Zonne 2008-04-20 ch 2,  | abuseSorry, hit the wrong button in the last review and it went without me. I like this better. I get the "Terrible Thing" You need to change "witch" to which. Spelling errors drive readers away. I Loved the line about the Aunt being excited about thinking for herself. Who can tell? lol In part one... I liked the 'world's cutest baby' bit. That is adorable. Sorry the first review got chopped... trying to make up for it here! Zonne the review marathon (link in my profile) |
| Zonne 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusewitch stands for witch should be which. alsome should be awesome That is one weird little beginning of a story. Very random. I like the line at the |
| Hercule-Hastings 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseWeird! So are you Savannah or not? |