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WeAreBroken
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseTHAT was very good. I truley mean it.
But my opinion is GOD is still on your side, no matter what they say. They may think they know him, but really they don't know a thing.
Arwen Dune
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseERASE HATE!
A.F Lanley
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseVery powerful poem, I can feel the despair, almost like I can feel you reaching, grasping the words and throwing them down because they're just so hateful to you... I don't know if that made any sense to you, but modified version: good poem. =].
simpleplan13
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseI like the format.. the longer lines and then the three short ones are really nice.. I also love the line "lost in a space where no one can reach me"
Getuie
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseIt stung to read this poem... maybe it's because I've struggled with a similar thing my entire life. I don't believe God is on the side of the judgemental though... And maybe He's not as against you as you think.
Imperia
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseinteresting poem, i know the feeling. i like the format you used it worked really well for this piece. i'm glad you have learned to accept yourself more and i hope, in time, things continue to get better for you.
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