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| WeAreBroken 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseTHAT was very good. I truley mean it. But my opinion is GOD is still on your side, no matter what they say. They may think they know him, but really they don't know a thing. |
| Arwen Dune 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseERASE HATE! |
| A.F Lanley 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful poem, I can feel the despair, almost like I can feel you reaching, grasping the words and throwing them down because they're just so hateful to you... I don't know if that made any sense to you, but modified version: good poem. =]. |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI like the format.. the longer lines and then the three short ones are really nice.. I also love the line "lost in a space where no one can reach me" |
| Getuie 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseIt stung to read this poem... maybe it's because I've struggled with a similar thing my entire life. I don't believe God is on the side of the judgemental though... And maybe He's not as against you as you think. |
| Imperia 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseinteresting poem, i know the feeling. i like the format you used it worked really well for this piece. i'm glad you have learned to accept yourself more and i hope, in time, things continue to get better for you. |