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| Reviews for Ira and the Sirens |
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   Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe 4/15/08 . chapter 11*gasp* no! bad evil unknown creature thing! hurting piper! shame on it. it should suffer! *cackles madly* |
| Aika101 4/15/08 . chapter 2 I'm late again, sorry! I running out of time again but I like this, and I want to continue Him eating the fish :) cute part for some reason lol I'm weird! But yeah, I really always ran out of time and when I do have time I forget about it. |
| abbybyrd 4/15/08 . chapter 11 Oh no poor Piper! I hope he's ok! Now I'm really nervous about whatever that predator is... |
| narcissistic 4/15/08 . chapter 11 omge new mystery! |
| Banane 4/15/08 . chapter 11 Ehehehehe. *hums jaws theme* Update soon! |
| Lady Ilaine 4/10/08 . chapter 10 sounds like somebodys got a crush on farleylee ;) |
| Prince Tin Lizzy 4/4/08 . chapter 1 Very nice, and full of a lot of metaphorical imagery. It's applied well to the overall tone of the story, which has a very intimate feel. All I can say is that salt water is much different than fresh water, and all of the dried salt on Ira's lips would've probably made him hellishly thirsty. Aside from that, I've got no real issue with anything, and this is an impressive first chapter. It definitely hooks the reader! |
| Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe 4/3/08 . chapter 10 O.O uh oh, that can't be good... Error-wise, I think the last sentence of the second paragraph seemed a little awkward. That's all. Hope you update again soon! Questions must be answered! |
| Banane 4/3/08 . chapter 10 Bah. Farleylee and Narissa Claymore. Obnoxious females unite. I demand more Martin! More more more! *chants* |
| Celeste Se'oir 4/3/08 . chapter 3 I love Piper, he reminds me of a ten year old. You did a good job getting the two character's emotions across, without having their opposing emotions dulling the intensity of the other. Laterz, Cathryn Black |
| Phantos 4/2/08 . chapter 9 Piper is odd. Sometimes he seems so childish and like he doesn't understand anything Ira asks of him, but other times he seems somewhat mature... I wanna know what Van Dine was up to. I assume this mysterious man has something to do with it. Is it all a set up of some kind? And what are the fish afraid of? (Okay, that last question made me giggle to myself.) Ira's gonna have a bum full of burrs. *grins Piper-like* -P |
| Aika101 4/2/08 . chapter 1 Hey, I read chapter one, I wish I could read more but I'm running out of time. Well it got me and I want to know more, so I'll read more later and review. This is D by the way lol took me too long to start reading them, sorry. |
| kitchu88 4/1/08 . chapter 9 i finally caught up on this. it's really great so far. i think martin's my favorite, or farleylee, but everyone else is cute too. pipers sort of like a kid, huh? i guess that ira put it the best way you can. :P |
| Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe 3/31/08 . chapter 9 DundunDUN! Yay, an update! Yay, Ira screams like a girl- I mean, hahaha...*cackles madly* Ahem. Ignoring that. I wants to pet Piper; he's just so adorable... ; |
| Banane 3/31/08 . chapter 9 I demand the next chapter at once! *puts up little picket-signs around your house* |
