wow! What a poem. I like it,
Which is quite true in my case, people think I am the little innocent when at home, in the room no one pass (aka my room lol) I read slash...muhhahahahahahhaa, Ok random!

i really like this. super point you make with there's something behind everyones eys. awesome!

But, can you truly say

That you have felt it too?

Have you felt it burning

Thoughout your body,

Prickling your every choice,


Those lines were really powerful. It gave me chills. Seriously.

I love the concept, though I think you could have pulled it off much better.

Love,
~Dia