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| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseWell I didn't expect them to say I love you haha but it was cute. They have a very powerful and quick connection and I can't wait to find out why. There are secrets, I just know it! ^_^ And, aww, Jonythan is such a gentleman for not going farther with her. Sweet. :) Can't wait for more |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 7, | abuseThat was so fun! Oh little kids. How lovely. :) I can't wait to see where they are going. Hehe. |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseWow. Her mother reacted very harshly. Obviously she has men issues and especially with trusting them. Poor Lexi. Oh well, Jon is there to save her yay! :) |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 5, | abuseHmm. So I have my theories about Jonythan. I think he is a vampire! :) That would be interesting. Hmm. Or, well, if not we know that he is something different. This chapter was cute, yet again. I love how they are very drawn to each other and have no idea why. Though they accepted it quite easily I'm still glad that there is some resistance there, like when Jonythan wouldn't go farther with her. :) It just made it... very realistic. Nice. Going to read more. |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 4, | abuseHaha yay! Wow, at first, towards the end, I was sort of disappointed because I thought it was all moving to fast but then you put in Lexi's doubts about them just meeting and stuff like that so it was all good. I'm so excited that she is going with him. :) We get to find out more! I liked this chapter but I do perhaps suggest making it slower... less obvious? Like, perhaps no tears or no thinking they can't spend another day without each other. But, that is just something small. Like I said it was redeemed and I liked it. :) Off to read more. |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseHaha cute! With the coin and such. Though, he gave her more than one kiss, lol. But I'm sure it was so damn good that he couldn't resis. ;) I love their personalities. This story is so witty and fresh. Very unique. Great job dear. |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 2, | abuseOh, haha! He kissed her. Woot. That was cute. Funny. And when he told her that curiosity killed the cat, her reply was awesome. I've never heard that before but I officially love it. :) Great work, another cute chappie. |
| nikkilicious377 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really interesting so far! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. Its very clever, the way you write. I really like Lexi so far. :) And, like her, I'm way curious about Jonythan! Lol. I guess that means you did well, right? Right. Can't wait to read more. So... off I go then. |
| girlwiththedog 2008-02-17 ch 9, | abuseYeah!! Finally another chapter. Very good, love Lilly. :) Keep going! |
| fantasy4luvr 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abusei love ur storyline! haha that jonathyn guy sounds liek a totally awesome guy xD update soon pls |
| Queen of the Rouges 2007-12-26 ch 8, | abuseI love it. ^^ So smexy, haha And I can't wait until that scene you mentioned *wink wink* haha But, really, I do love it. ^^ Though I have to say they fell in love rather quickly. I think it should have taken a little longer at the very least. But, whatever, it's still great. ^^ Tehee |
| girlwiththedog 2007-12-26 ch 8, | abuseIt is perfect Evann. Jonathyn is perfect, and Lexi is too. I can't wait to read more! Keep working on it... |
| Joseph33759 2007-12-21 ch 6, | abuseok so whats going to happen next? I'll wait... |
| girlwiththedog 2007-12-21 ch 6, | abuseGood job Evann! I love it more and more each chapter. Can't wait for more, keep writing! |
| katieo9239 2007-12-20 ch 5, | abuseCute. I really like it. Please update soon. |