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Reviews For: First Love

simpleplan13
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot.. the imagery is great.. I really love the chorus... btw do you need help making actual stanzas by getting rid of the double spacing
Artemis Anderson
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseHm...if you DO add music to it, I think this would be an awesome song d:D Great job!
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