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| fatbird33 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseYou use such great words in your writings! |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem a lot. especially "Is ‘natural’ to always smile?" I know what you mean and I agree that the answer is no. This is really well written, I like the way it starts and ends with a similar idea. |
| Lady Fingers 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusei really like this one, its good. |
| Eternity's Rain 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseIt rhymes well, but I don't really get it. Its sort of bland, no offense. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseLove the last two lines. I love all of it, those two lines just stick out more to me. Good job! Kristie Marie |
| Princess-anna57 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI HEART the last four lines. Heartheartheart. Couldn't be said better. Awesome poem. GREAT job. write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |