this story is awesome
I love that you have loads of difefrent sub plots in the story too
the style of your story is like the boy series by meg cabot - which was really good

cool its aWesome ;D love it

keep goingg!

Okay, right after I finished reading OP in winglin for the -cough- fifth time, I found this! Yeah you read it right, I love the humor you insert in OP and it's a very original plot, methinks. [:

Anyway, you're a fabulous writer and it's always a pleasure to read a story with no grammatical/tense/spelling errors. Keep on writing!

I love the format and how it allows your story to progress! It's a great piece - light-hearted and funny, and a good read.

Just something - it might be good to push the story along faster; it's seems to be repeating everything from everyone's point of view, and this could be tedious in future.

That's all! Please update soon!

Hello! I'm totally enjoying the style! At first, it took some getting use to, but I'm definitely hooked now! Hope you update soon!

HELLO (:

i wanted to submit a review only AFTER i finished reading everything but once i say JOE CHENG on your profile i couldn't help myself.

especially after i watched they kiss again AGAIN. xD
have you watched is started with a kiss or they kiss again? :D

anyways.
I LOVE IT SO FARR.
gaah.
anyways back to reading and i will review again after i finish.
yay.
oh and.. aww you haven't updated in REALLYY lonngg =((
anyways.
I'M CHINESE TOO
(:

Hey!
Great chapter again! I love how Shelley thinks he likes her, loves her, wants to marry her! lol Anywho, I can now finally say: Update soon!! :D

HC

Ha! She almost slapped him! loll That was funny! Love how she beat him on a one-on-one game! Go Tess! Great chapter! :D

HC

lol, funny chapter again! I love how Tess vented! :D

HC

Wonder what Arron did...Cam seems hot! lol Even if he is fictional...sighs...anywho great chapter!! :D

HC

Love the first chapter! Arron seems hilarious!! :D

HC

UPDATE!

I thought you said it was done. T.T

yay! update update update please! :D

I love thiw story and personally, I like the e-mail format. It's different and still interesting to read. Oh and I really hope you will update soon because I don't know how long I can wait.

I really, really don't like this story AT ALL. I just can't get into it and it seems so juvenile, awkward, and immature...I'm sorry, maybe future chapters will be better? Because right now, I'm definitely not feeling it...