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Viv26 2008-08-20 ch 6,	abuseI love the format and how it allows your story to progress! It's a great piece - light-hearted and funny, and a good read. Just something - it might be good to push the story along faster; it's seems to be repeating everything from everyone's point of view, and this could be tedious in future. That's all! Please update soon!
rainbabie 2008-06-19 ch 6,	abuseHello! I'm totally enjoying the style! At first, it took some getting use to, but I'm definitely hooked now! Hope you update soon!
monichi 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseHELLO (: i wanted to submit a review only AFTER i finished reading everything but once i say JOE CHENG on your profile i couldn't help myself. especially after i watched they kiss again AGAIN. xD have you watched is started with a kiss or they kiss again? :D anyways. I LOVE IT SO FARR. gaah. anyways back to reading and i will review again after i finish. yay. oh and.. aww you haven't updated in REALLYY lonngg =(( anyways. I'M CHINESE TOO (:
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-05 ch 6,	abuseHey! Great chapter again! I love how Shelley thinks he likes her, loves her, wants to marry her! lol Anywho, I can now finally say: Update soon!! :D HC
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abuseHa! She almost slapped him! loll That was funny! Love how she beat him on a one-on-one game! Go Tess! Great chapter! :D HC
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuselol, funny chapter again! I love how Tess vented! :D HC
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseWonder what Arron did...Cam seems hot! lol Even if he is fictional...sighs...anywho great chapter!! :D HC
Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseLove the first chapter! Arron seems hilarious!! :D HC
The Mac Scribble 2008-03-24 ch 6,	abuseUPDATE! I thought you said it was done. T.T
theslykit 2008-03-15 ch 5,	abuseyay! update update update please! :D
happy ever afterxx 2008-03-02 ch 6,	abuseI love thiw story and personally, I like the e-mail format. It's different and still interesting to read. Oh and I really hope you will update soon because I don't know how long I can wait.
Catharsis195 2008-02-17 ch 6, anon.	abuseI really, really don't like this story AT ALL. I just can't get into it and it seems so juvenile, awkward, and immature...I'm sorry, maybe future chapters will be better? Because right now, I'm definitely not feeling it...
buckie 2008-02-08 ch 6, anon.	abuseWah. I guess I like the revised version more than the one on the ella-chun fc. It's sweet, as always, and even though I know what will happen, updates are appreciated. :D
I Dream of Scotland 2008-02-04 ch 6,	abuseHey I really love your story. I like the different format because it gives the reader the chance to add to the story in his/her own head. Very fun and cute. Looking forward to future chapters! :)
Reviewer 2008-02-02 ch 6, anon.	abusewell, if you want the honest truth why this story doesn't have more reviews...well, it's because this story isn't good. The complete email format could be interesting but you haven't dont it successfully. Your reasoning is good, but you are not professional in your stories- consider JD Allen's latest story and you will see snippets of email dialogue which is amusing, filling and done realistically. There is a lack of connection and just that necessary realistic appearance...It just seems like you are writing a detached story cut into separate lines. Your previous story set in the Regency era had great potential- albeit the mechanical errors and slight intrudence of the author, it was written well. This story just doesn't cut it- and the lack of revies is to show for it. There are inane, insipid stories that have plenty of stories and beautiful stories that have a paucity of reviewers but generally, the more reviews you have garnered, the unique attractiveness and good quality of work is to show for that. Your story is no anomoly- it is bad and therefore, you will not increase your chances of expecting any great sudden bursts of acclaim. THat said, you can definitely seek to improve this story or return perhaps, to your previous stories.

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