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| Breezebits 2008-01-13 ch 13,  | abuseHmm...interesting...keep it up! This is an awesome story! |
| Breezebits 2008-01-06 ch 11, | abuseIt's so sad! Poor Heather. =( |
| Ava Lawrence 2007-12-31 ch 9, | abuseAhh! Cliffie. =/ I shall try to wait patiently. Not that you usually take too long. =] |
| myownlostcrazystory 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWRITE MORE! I cant wait for the next chapter. This is a great story. poor Heather tho. |
| Ava Lawrence 2007-12-30 ch 8, | abuse=[ Poor Heather... Strong story line, though. Obviously thought through. Just one small thing.. in chap 7, i think the verb you want is trudge not trundle. |
| Ava Lawrence 2007-12-29 ch 6, | abuseNice. This story continues to be good. =] |
| Ava Lawrence 2007-12-28 ch 4, | abuseI like this story. =] It's interesting and fairly well written.. |
| Breezebits 2007-12-27 ch 2, | abuseOh...poor Heather. =( I really like this plot. I actually had a dream about something similar once...although I guess I'm just rambling now. Anyways, I like it! Update! |