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| Moondog Dozier 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI like the base emotions that you've woven through this. The voice is excellent. Questioning, and self-evaluating. This works well because it is centralized to a moment and flowers outward from there to past and future recollections and possibilities. Very well written. MD:77. |