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| Moondog Dozier 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseI like the specific detail that you've interwoven through this. It has a wonderful tribute feel, and presents a vivid picture of the feelings of and about the connection. You've really improved on giving the specifics of a situation to make the reader part of the portrait painted. Excellent growth as a writer. Great work. MD:77. |