You forgot the space between Toshi's "Why?" and Datsueba's reveal of her husband's name. Also, shouldn't Toshi be asking "How do you know so much?" instead of "Why do you know so much?"

You also forgot to close the speech " after Toshi calls the hag his enemy.

"-You know what do if she follows.” Forgot the "to".

Space between paragraphs needed after Toshi admits he was worried.

I missed this story. I'm glad to see Toshi made the right choice. And who might this new player be? I sense a boss battle in the future. Toshi is big pimpin.

It's great to see you're back! I rather enjoyed this chapter, especially the foreshadowing in the last bit. And I thought you did a good job at creating a tense atmosphere with Datsueba there.

I thought Enma was dead...? Well, he seems to be somewhat annoyingly resilient. :D Does this mean he'll be continuing to go after Toshi in the future?

Amazing battle. Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, it does. It seems there's a lot more to the symbiote than meets the eye, with it turning black and all...

Yay for quick updates! Now, on to picking the occasional nit that might have gone past your filters.

"Toshi tried to think of anything he could to help." - Could use a "do" after "could".

"Toshi gritted his teeth as his bones strain to keep steady" - You seem to have switched tenses mid-sentence. Turn "strain" into "strained".

"The boy rose again, stepping over Kaiya to place himself between him and Enma" - Unless Kaiya changed gender, you should change "him" to "her".

Okay, now that that's done, it's time to celebrate.

Awesome chapter! Yoyoi!

Datsueba finally appears. Let's see what the old hag has up her sleeve.

If the Symbiote is indeed some kind of "balance", then it must have evil as well as good. I imagine old Symbi told Toshi he had gone too far because he had delved too deeply into the symbiote's powers without being prepared.

I look forward to seeing him go into "Symbiote: Omega" mode. >_>

GAH! Now, it's time to wait again!

Yay! I missed this story! Okay, on with the review!

"He threatens to destroy the once chance you have…" - 'One'.

"Enma gasped as he lifted entirely off the ground" - he 'was' lifted off.

"look too serious, to concerned, despite your depraved smile" - Forgot an o in to(o) concerned.

"Enma’s shoulders moving in short small jerks" - could use a comma after 'short'.

Every bit as great as I had expected. The wait was definitely worth it. I can't begin to say how incredible this story is. Top notch.

Really, it feels like looking at a movie. Or reading a movie. ... You get what I mean.

The title of the next chapter worries me. Will Toshi have to choose between Enma and Kaiya? Will he have to choose between delivering the final blow and not? Will he finally choose Pepsi or Coca-Cola?

I CAN'T TAKE THE SUSPENSE!

I saw that last dirty trick coming, but never the very last twist you threw in there. Wow...a great chapter, with a awesome turning point.

Sweet! Alpha's back to deliver a much needed spanking!

Also, I'm enjoying the budding romance between Toshi and Kaiya (Bow-Chica-Bow-Wow).

Aside from this battle, the moment I'm looking forward to the most is the crew's encounter with Datsueba. The way I see it, the old hag will join the crew under the pretense of helping them.

The universe's reaction to a Da-Ku Lord joining forces with The Symbiote = Golden

A lot of dialogue, but it's necessary, and flows along fairly well. It was interesting to see how they thought - especially Enma. He's quite the intriguing character. :D

well... finally :p

'I can understand your distraught, Regent.' - I'm not totally sure, but I think you meant to say, "you're distraught".

'Haruko’s icy determination melted into relif' - "relief"

'something about his voice was too calm, to collected' - "too collected"

'Haruko missed as step as the artificial gravity was lost' - "a step"

Yay! Finally, update! I missed this story so much! *glomps author*

I'm curious; are you planning on making the Symbiote series a 3 story deal, 5 story deal, or what?

oh wow, never thought takeshi would actually try to kill his own son. but then again, it isn't much of a surprise. He's a somewhat sad old man. :D

I'm looking forward to datsueba's and toshi's meeting.

uh oh. that's all i can say.

The Regent and the Daku King should just have hot steamy sex with each other and get it over with.

I caught some minor mistakes, but I'm too tired to go into detail.

I can't wait to see the animated version of the Symbiote series in a decade or so.

oh wow. never thought that the symbiote could heal, too! woohoo!

I would totally buy this story if it was available at my local bookstore. It's awesomer than a few best-selling books I've read.

I noticed a few mistakes, but I'm not going to bother pointing them out this time. Just know they are there.

I love you, in a platonic way.