the best part of 'believe' is the 'lie' :)

even without knowing them, i love any boy like this, the ones with the brains and the wit to play along.

i don't know if it was the lines or the dialoge that made this, but it was memorable.

Really like this, especially the imagery and the way there's so many different references tangled in it.

Oh, I loved this. I'm a sucker for Alice references.

Very nice imagery. I particularly enjoyed the line:

"should he remember how to fly or she remember how to fall."

Great write. It inspires something I've thought about a lot lately.
Love should be as natural as an earthquake; however, it's being
'scientizied' and socialized to a fault.

Write on!

Why did you elect not to use any caps?

Interesting, quite.

'she laughs in three hundred and sixty degrees.' 'chaos theory glimmers on her lips.' 'fistfuls of cocentric lifelines.'

there is nothing i can say. this poem has so much power in it. it would be great read aloud, though i cannot imagine how one would engineer the reading of the last line, which is somewhat the best. the concept of cycles really intrigues me and i love how you wrote it out.

sometimes really discourages me because there is so much complete rubbish on it but this, this poem is a thing of beauty. i cannot read it enough times.

ah, I'm jealous, you are such a wonderful writer =]
excellent work.

I like it a lot. I pretty much love anything that's secretly about Alice in Wonderland. I'm also reviewing you to tell you that I would love to add you the C2 'The Life Writers'. I just wanted to tell you that I'm adding you.

Kisses,
~Everything to you

that last line was genius.
play with words =]

keep writing

wow
so confusing
yet so entertaining

Oh, I like this. You've managed to describe a distortion of reality and the sheer un-logicality of other worlds with your punctuation, your words, your poem. Very well done. :)

"she laughs in three hundred and sixty degrees" This is a wonderfully expressed thought, and is my favorite line :) Great job overall.

horrah for being Irish! :)

interesting. i like it. quite mysterious and unique. lovely. keep writing. = )

Interesting. I didn't really figure out what you were doing till the very end. Mixing in a bunch of movies, I presume? Clever. Cool poetry, all the same.

The visual aspect of this work is truly powerful. The pictures are eccentric and yet perfectly bonded. Also, the parenthesis are a clever touch. I have a feeling I'm going to really enjoy your other pieces, haha.