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| Malissa Michelle White 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed this story. The writing was clear and purposeful, but still weighed with guilt. There could be some stylistic additions and substitutions, but I think it fits well with imperfection, which runs throughout. Very inspirational! |