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Reviews For: Rebirth Short Story

andrhars
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked this. The dialogue was believable and straight to the point, unlike some other conversations I've read on this site at times...I also like the descriptions of the room, you keep to the bare necessities. I wish I could do that sometimes, hehe.
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