I feel the sporatic nature of this piece makes it somewhat hard to read in a smooth fashion. There doesn't seem to be a definite beginning, middle, end theme going on.
I love the subject content, however. It is so powerful.
-J.A.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).

Very sad, yet there is a glimmer of hope and of courage, of strength in the midst of a bitter fate. I especially like the link between the two persons and the way it is explored. Languagewise I like the contrasts between the short and long lines.

Quite intriguing. I like the longer lines at the beginning the most, but the rest isn't bad. Interesting piece.