My god, I love this

“Well, I’ve only seen your friend Syl a bunch of times, and let me tell you: the fact that he wants to get into your pants and the most obvious, unmissable, in-your-face DUH thing in the world.”
-- EXACTLY!! Poor Dale and props for Champayne =]

I love how clueless this kid is! But what on earth will Syl do...

Meter squares of nothing else than…bubblewrap.
--he's such an adorable oddball! However did you think him up?!

If she says 'like' just one more time...

Yay! Go Dale!

You keep saying Syl is annoying, but I like him =] I mean, we totally get why he is how he is!

but how the hell am I supposed to control myself when he keeps being so **…him!
-- love that line =]

OH THANK JESUS YOU ARE BACK
finally
finally

FINALY

i think you are the only story i have ever NOT given up on after that insanely long time period. And now all i can ask is

UPDATE SOON! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXXT
you go tme hooked on your story!'

ARGH

That was the most climactic climax, um...ever. After seventeen chapters of extreme sexual tension that just goes on forever (ha, sounds like my life!), they were all like, **. So thank you for finally doing that! I appreciate it. A lot. A lot a lot. Mmhm.

Well obviously I don't know if you've written it yet, it may already be up, no idea, but if not...I, personally, would like a rather drawn out description of the sex in Dale's perspective. I shamelessly admit this to you.

This story is wonderful.

Just off the top of my head, a favorite movie quote is "The things you own end up owning you." -Tyler Durden. From Fight Club, a great movie, and a better book.

Katie reminds me of an acquaintance. She's not exactly mean enough to hit, but more than obnoxious enough. She's really got that condescending, high-horse, theater-kid thing going for her (no worries, I don't dislike all theater kids, I'm friends with plenty). I think I like it. As a role in the story, not as like someone I'd want to be friends with. This is a compliment, I promise!

I still like Champagne. We could be friends.

Reading this makes me love you. Just by the way.

I like Champagne...but not his pigtails. I think I'm just having a visualization problem when we get to that part of him. I'll work on it! Love the personality though, it makes me laugh :)

I do wish you luck in your quest for musical enlightenment.

And the whole bubble wrap sequence left me in mild hysterics. It was...hysterical, needless to say. I loved it.

And mid-chapter (slight ADD!), I went and watched a trailer for Legend. I must see this movie.

Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story! It's not angst-ridden, which I love, because so many are, so this is all refreshing and whatnot. Dale and Syl are so goofy. In a good way. Well, in a wow-you-two-really-are-something,-being-in-love-and-all-but-oblivious-to-each-others'-obvious-lust way. Mmhm.

Also, your notes are hilarious. I call your apple banana smoothie shoulder-licking and raise you one wrestling match in a tub of strawberry jello.

I really like it..I think today is Bubbles marathon