 PeachyKeeen 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Alright I'm just gonna say what's on everyone else's mind: please add more/make this into a story! |
 SunsetRainbow 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Ahmygod!
IF YOU'D ONLY PERFECTED THE ENDING D:
It would have been utterly amazing. |
 Zenia 2009-10-15 . chapter 1 Hey, that was really well written. Have you ever thought about writing Teen Titans fanfiction?
-Read You Later |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-09-06 . chapter 1Wow, you really have a knack for one shots. This is a seemingly common place for love to happen (college) but you put a whole new spin on things. One I have never read before. Your characters are endearing and dialogue well written. Awesome job. |
 hydrocancellation 2009-08-27 . chapter 1MY FAVOURITE! I can't believe you wrote THIS well! I mean, not that you can't write this well but the one-shots you wrote before were kind of rushed and I LOVE this shot. One of my favourites although the beginning was kind of draggy. But the way you wrote this story was more matured than the previous ones you wrote that I've read so far. Keep it up. Kudos! =D |
 Psychoblah 2009-08-18 . chapter 1 That was amazing! |
 music-is-love10 2009-08-11 . chapter 1 it was so cute! :) |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2009-07-16 . chapter 1ADORABLE!
I can sympathize with the 'oh dear lord where am I and what am I doing here?' college thing. Izzy was so relatable, and cute, and funny. And Jack. YUM!
Great one shot. I enjoyed it! |
 Fairy Skull 2009-07-09 . chapter 1O I loved it!! It was good, I just Loved the Hitting his car and Meeting over and over again! Great job! |
 s-pecial-lee me 2009-06-14 . chapter 1ah! why didn't you finish it with them actually getting together?!?!?! now i have to use my imagination. and that kinda sucks. :( haha but its a great story anyway and men in uniform are so sexy... |
 elmoz BFF 2009-06-02 . chapter 1 aw. so sweet :D |
 wen 2009-05-28 . chapter 1 i completely loved it |
 Narq 2009-05-23 . chapter 1This is good, very good. As you said, the development is better, and that is what I find with my stories too if I let it sit for a while.
A very very entertaining and wonderful read.
Narq. |
 QuickSilverSand 2009-05-06 . chapter 1Izzy is hilarious! love her! please write more like this!
you are such a good writer...may find it hard to write humorous stories...the fact that you can write one so successfully is a proof of your excellent writer-ness! |
 Dreaming Wonderland 2009-03-28 . chapter 1I'm in love with this one-shot. Mucho laughter on my end..and it's so cute:) Jack Goode...man of the law..Izzy Zeiger...awesome spaz..and when they combine..it's true LURVE
...i tried to make it sound super hero-ish...
Nice work ;] |